I did quite a few different versions of the same part but in the end I still like Pre Viz Draft 02 (b) the best, it just works better. With Pre Viz Draft 03 the end and the timing of the animation didn't quite work so Pre Viz Draft 04 was fixing the timings and alter the ending part of it. There will probably be a few more tweaks to do once all the animating is done and it's all put together.
Pre Viz Draft 02 (c)
Pre Viz Draft 02 (c)
Pre Viz Draft 02 (d)
Pre Viz Draft 02 (e)
Pre Viz Draft 02 (f)
Pre Viz Draft 03
Pre Viz Draft 04
Nice shots, Kym. Though a minor but important tweak would be to remove the ease in and out's when you start and finish a camera movement. That makes the transitions into the next shot much more natural because it doesn't feel like it's always stopping and starting up again. It would feel like it's all part of the same movement.
ReplyDeleteAlso, it might just be me, but I'm not so keen on the animation ending. If you you're putting us into these spectacular spaces, with all these dramatic movements, then it feels like visual robbery, so to speak, by having the final camera shot end by lingering halfheartedly on a floor and staircase.