Good to see this arrive on here, Kym - I'm just really keen that you stay on top of this unit and excel. You deal with the 'big homosexual context'and open up some interesting debate re. the murder substituting other illicit activities. Stylistically, however, you need to start using your quotes proactively; i.e. when you include a quote, the review should also reflect on the content of the quote, discussing its meaning, and then using the quote to advance the discussion. Don't just insert quotes - you need to use your evidence to help power the discussion.