aargh! WHY ARE YOU WRITING IN CAPITAL LETTERS, KYM? IT'S LIKE HAVING YOU SHOUT YOUR IDEAS IN MY FACE! :(... what I can say is you've got plot ideas here - not story ideas. What is your story? What is your idea 'about?'For example, if your 'butterfly hunter' was looking for a particular soul to capture - whose soul would that be, and why? Backstory....!
Sorry it was just the font I was using it writes it all in capitals.